Arohaina's Action World similes

Action World Day  22.11.16.

On Wednesday I was going to Action World. The side was as slippery as a fish and as hard as a rock.

The bars were as high as a tower. It was as scary as a haunted castle. The rope was as long as a crocodile.

It  was as wobbly as the Monkey Bars.

I went on the big inflatable slide that was scarey as a wild dog.

Arohaina's Speech-" Should We Have Fizzy Drinks at School?"

Should we have Fizzy Drinks at School?-Arohaina

I think we should not  have fizzy drinks  at school. They are not healthy for you.  

Firstly fizzy  can rot your teeth. And your teeth will be yuck and you  do you want  rotten  teeth. If   you  drink  fizzy drink’s  then you might get  black sore teeth and a smelly breath.   

Secondly,  I think water  is  better than   fizzy.     Water does not    have     sugar    in    it --- only     fizzy     drinks  have sugar.

Thirdly fizzy drinks can cause cancer and give you heart disease. They can make you fat as they have so much sugar in them. They make us get older quicker.

Lastly, they can make you silly and violent  and change your brain. So drink water and NOT  fizzy drink.

To conclude       fizzy’s   make  you burp.