Catching Eels
W.A.L.T. create an exciting book sharing a cool thing that I did in the holidays using Book Creator. Next time I will complete my work faster instead of chatting with my mates. I will give them a surprise when I have beaten them finished.
Ki Ora Kayden,
ReplyDeleteI like the way how you used describing words instead of boring, bad words. How long does the eel grow? How fast does the eel slither or swim? Next time include facts about the subject that you're writing about.
Zara